Wow, this poem was very touching! I could feel the pain from the writer, and the hope that brings forth a new day. I loved this poem! You did a great job! 5/5

*~BrittBratt~*

I sense an event or a situation has taken your love far away. Here you are pining for her arrival and waiting for that happy moment. Yet the write holds a sadness that this love might not return while the author refuses to give up and waits...a touching write.

Hello Augastus,

I realise that this poem was written over a year ago, so I hope your 'bride' has come back to you and all is going well.

This poem is written from the heart and from a personal perspective. The image of sitting on a balcony looking out (hazily) through cataracts at a landscape in the hope that she will appear. This image is sad indeed, sad enough to run out of tears.

A good write.

Take care,

Michael

Straight from the heart!!

Hello Augustus,

1st- I want you to know that you are a great author,

2nd- this piece was so lovely and romantic..if she would see this she'll probably go back to you soonest. or if not she'll live her life with regret.

3rd--I have some suggestion you may consider .

I'm a crying soul,
Who is waiting for (insert "a" here) decade,

-->Who is waiting for a decade,

Daily evening I sit at(maybe it's better to change "at" with "On") my balcony;

-->Daily evening I sit on my balcony;

Seems like soon my eyes would ran (if you would consider this--> by changing the "ran" with a "run" because u have used the modal verb "would" before "ran"..so "run" is more appropriate.) out of tears.

-->Seems like soon my eyes would run out of tears.

4th--your feelings dispatched perfectly .

well done.
Gel