Comments : Turn off the sun

  • 9 years ago

    by BlueJay

    This is beautiful. I love the imagery and love here.

  • 9 years ago

    by BlueJay

    This is beautiful. I love the imagery and love here.

  • 9 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Beautiful little write which is about appreciating that special one, and just to wake up beside them, and fall asleep beside them everyday, how precious,

    There is a lot of errors in grammar, nothing major, just capital letters missing, apostrophes etc. All which can be fixed easily if you wanted to.

    But great poem.