Unlike the last 2 i commented this is on par with some of the best stuff i've read from you (IN MY SILLY OPINION!)

this is really good work, powerful, emotional and really really well constructed

Oh wow..i like..no..love..the last two paragraphs...they are splendid.the metaphor ghost is excellent ;) ...
rania...youhave been possessed by a ghost :o...oh no...that is not a similarity between us...gosh I should call an exorcist fast...who knows that might become a similarity....i'm not gonna talk to you now >.<
Oh lol jk :p

"For how long will you
be my metaphor ghost" <------------- HOLY MOLY I just fainted.... love that line....

Sighs- This poem describes to a tee how hard it is when missing someone... it truly is a haunting :-(

love this piece!

This is excellent - all of it's good but the first stanza really drew me in with its imagery. Well written