by Scott Cole Feb 5, 2015
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
A glimpse or peek of things gone, |
by gumshuda
This poem is beautiful too... |
by Jerry Bolton
I found the absence of the comma troubling. You used punctuation, but only at the end of your lines. Line 7 could use a coma between the words "mind," and "marking." Likewise line 10 needs a comma between the words "moment," and "a." Also line 12 "mind" and "stopping." |