This almost read like song lyrics to me, and I mean that in a good way, as this write seemed soulful. I also noticed your structure in this. The 7-lined stanzas then the shorter 3-lined stanzas, back and forth, so that was neat and gave it direction.

There were certain lines that seemed so simple yet really provoked thought. The idea of how a person can come into our lives, be present yet give you themselves only a bit at a time: "drifting in, moving away" and "giving me nothing, giving me all"

I did have a question why this wasn't placed in the love section?

Also, in the fourth line of the first stanza, should "envelop" be plural?

Usually I'm a stickler for punctuation, but I think what worked in this piece so well was that it flowed line to line, was easy to follow, and you didn't need the periods, only the minimal commas here and there. It made the piece read softly and gently. Hope you keep sharing here.

Welcome to PnQ, by the way!

Absolutely loved the vivid fantasy of this and the images it created in my mind, very wonderfully done!