Comments : The Dream (Club challenge)

  • 9 years ago

    by Liz

    I'm not even sure what to say about this. I've read it over quite a few times and I'm just speechless.

  • 9 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Rania, this is another wonderful piece. The language and imagery created throughout this poem is stunning. "Floating in the mirage of black and blue clouds" - this flows and rolls off the tongue beautifully.
    And then the end. "...she doesn't wake up I wake up" - wonderful.
    All the best,
    Ben