Comments : Life As We Know It.

  • 9 years ago

    by Tim

    This is something I understand a lot about, its so hard seeing someone you love make big mistakes like this. A very important message to share, and make light of.

    Your rhythm is perfect, and word choice is great. I read it in my head like a rap kind of style with a mellow beat in the back ground... But perhaps thats my musician side projecting a little.

    Well done! it was great to read

    5/5

    • 9 years ago

      by DarkLight

      Thought I was the only one who musicalizes poetry, every poem to me is a music, created in different genre, you just need to give it a rhythm, and the beats will follow.....
      Thanks Tim.