I really liked this piece, Zach, it is very well written. The imagery and comparisons/vernacular you chose were wonderful together and tied the last line into the piece very well. I love the personality in this one as well because it really managed to bring the piece to life in a way I was far from expecting. Thank you for capturing the spirit of our long weekend together so wonderfully, although I think you should have made a side note about the neighboring lands being the other bed and mom/the brothers :P