Chaotic Black

Meme constructed a powerful poem this week which caught my attention with the creative and mysterious title. The narration of the poem itself is pleasant, it holds a good flow, and is also surprisingly suspenseful towards the end. I like how the ending is a cliff-hanging type, where the reader's mind then does not finish with the end of the poem, but instead it starts a whole creative story of its own as it explores a second part of the poem.

Splendid Write!!!

"In the depth of his sin she stayed
sober; anchoring them both, and
maybe one day"

WOW, such a powerful, open-ended yet secret promise!

The witness to another's inner turmoil - wrapped in guilt. As it eats away at him, how far will she allow herself to be dragged down?

Such self-sacrifice comes with a price, but ultimately there is the hope of catharsis. In this case, the trauma may have been great, but the support is likely to be even greater - hope is the greatest medicine available! Gandhi himself has said there is always a way out of hell. I believe this lady stands on his path out.

Oh wow..this is beautiful...loved the open ending too...loved everything...
Nominated...
Oh lol..your poem goes in my favourite :)
I'll leave a better comment probably after one month :p