Hello,

I like the format here. A piece of prose that enables freedom. Ironic really as this is what is being searched for within this piece.

Again, its good to write, to get it out.

Take care,

Michael

Good piece... I feel a grasp of hope with the 'search for freedom'

Only quarms I have are 'place just think to clear my head' I think you missed a to out 'place just to think to clear my head'
'where life make sense' I think you need a 's' on the 'makes'