A Deathly New Year

by Someone Invisible   Feb 12, 2015


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My stomach has cramped, my eyes tightened
but I show no further of how I'm frightened,
not of the dark but what lurks within
the thoughts in my head surely are sin.
I have this burning urge to cry
and I struggle to lock it inside,
If you really want to know the truth
there's nothing left inside me to soothe.
no anger, nor sadness, or feeling at all
just the shattered piece left from my fall.
I'm sure I used to be happy, normal, and whole
but I fell from a cliff and left behind my soul.
So I'm lying in bed as my tears finally slip by
midnight strikes; I've started the New Year...
Wanting to die...

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  • 8 years ago

    by Euphanasia

    Sh!t that was sad. Peace be with you always friend.
    Write on...

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Wow, this is deep and relatable in many ways.

    I have been kicked down and broken many times but the key is not to stay down for long. Pick yourself up, brush yourself off and move on.

    (hugs) Em

    • 8 years ago

      by Someone Invisible

      Im sorry you were able to relate to this. Its a sad piece of work of mine and i never like to hear someone has been in this position before. Thank you for the review however. :)

  • 8 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Kia?

    This poem was crying out like the words it contained. The theme of being broken is one many of us can relate to. I like the idea of just being a shattered piece left over following a fall. This portrays well the reduced feeling we get when when suffering an emotional trauma.

    Well done on this and I hope you feel much better now.

    Take care.

    Michael

    • 8 years ago

      by Someone Invisible

      Yes my name is Kia.
      Thank you, i was very raw while i was writting this. I am feeling better. I thank you kindly for the review. :)
      I hope youre doing well and have a wonderful day.

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