You did intriguing job with the introduction, still if you don't mind, I'd like to suggest something here, it's neatly penned short prose in need for some flavor:)
~I can't bury my heart beside you; your tombstone won't want my blessing.
^^ I suggest replacing the word "want" with other distinctive word like "cradle", the imagery was pretty mature at the beginning but the word "want" is a very average choice to complete the meaning.
~ It's dying somewhere outside near the sinful snow.
^ Perhaps you need a comma here.