by Sunshine
I love the feelings I get when a poem makes me murmur words of admiration to myself. I am starting to believe that the most personal poems are the strongest. |
Not that I usually disagree with Rania, but I think "via" captures the essence of the idea here. On the other hand, I think you could improve the work by restructuring the last two stanzas into four stanzas, bring the line lengths closer to equal and redoing the meter. |
by Meena Krish
This is one of those poems which takes the reader into the world of the writer who has entered a world of her own! Something like reading a book and loosing oneself. |