This was awesome. great read

Indeed awesome :)

Hi Adam,

I like the setting the couplets spread out. This makes this reader take each one and process it at a relaxed speed.

The rhyme throughout is not imposing, rather scattered to bring home certain points.

The imagery is clear and paints this moonlit couple as a silhouette, but cleverly, the sun is the metaphor for hope.

Well done,

Michael

Adam,

This is a really well thought out piece that grabs my attention because of the short, sharp couplets. The rhyme and flow fit like a glove too.

Em