by Serpentine Feb 14, 2015
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
How could you? |
by Mello193
Indeed as Azrael said, raw emotions were plenty. This poem is one of the funner ones i've read today. I like the way you change perspectives. the only issue with that overall is in the third stanza, you change harshly from first perspective to third. The imagining was profoundly sad, but the last stanza is very beautiful and inspiring. Good first piece to post. |
by Azrael
Very raw emotions in this piece, i enjoyed it. |