In Seasonal Fragility... (collaboration with Naughtymouse)

by Meme & Naughtymouse   Feb 14, 2015


How silently the leaves fall
in the autumn, just as the
tears of humanity roll down
the cheek of the oppressed,
leaving them exposed to
winter's rage.

And as winter approaches,
it drags them down with it.
Until their fragility cracks
like a porcelain doll tossed
between children's hands.

If only they knew how to
just breathe as one, for once,
they might see the spring
ahead -a chance to plant the
seeds of the future, to play
the first note of an everlasting
harmony.

Then maybe the brightness
of summer would lead them
to their own inner glow, show
them that the harvest they reap
is by the seeds that they plant.

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  • 9 years ago

    by earlgreytea

    Love Love Love it. I always get hella depressed in winter so this hits the nail on the head.

  • 9 years ago

    by DarkLight

    I like the use of the four seasons all describing something different but related to each.
    Lovely.

  • 9 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Something different yet its something that shows the pain of the world. The two of you have worked so well to make this write not only flow smoothly but the thought, feelings and images unfolds without interruptions. Well penned!!

    • 9 years ago

      by Meme

      Thank you. We appreciate your comment :)

  • 9 years ago

    by PorcelainMoon

    Using the word porcelain always has such a dramatic affect. But I'm bias.

  • 9 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    This is one of my favourite writes very different to what I usually write and it has been a long time since we collabed ....I really enjoyed it :) I do hope to collab again and thankyou for posting while ive been away, I was hoping you would! awesome as always Meme :))

    • 9 years ago

      by Meme

      And its different to me too!

      I always enjoy writing with you Ben, you bring a different side of me :)

      Amazing as always!

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