Comments : Coffee Beans and Thoughts

  • 9 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    It looks beautiful posted....

    So happy we did this piece,
    You and I being may 10th babies, I think our next one should be in honor of our birthday lol

    Thank you for writing with me

    • 9 years ago

      by Poet on the Piano

      It was great writing with you *hugs* And yes, that's a brilliant idea. I will mark it on my calendar haha

  • 9 years ago

    by PorcelainMoon

    This poem is next level. I love the coffee theme. I don't even know why I love the coffee theme. Coffee makes everything better. This write is inspiring with all the pretty wording. I miss you poetry.

  • 9 years ago

    by Chamomile

    She stormed through a coffee-less life;
    a soul yearns for caffeinated dreams.
    ^
    Wooow what an opening for this poem. Those two lines by themselves spoke tons to me, so many thoughts and interpretations rushed to my mind. I don't know how you two came up with the idea, but I think it is brilliant!!
    Aftee I rwad then I stopped and thought about tons of things. How dull could a life be without energy, without something that would give us a push towards a dream that wouls light up our lives. It is said that a lofe without a dream is meaningless. This is just one thought out of many others.

    What a creative piece, loooveddd it :)