Comments : 280 but First

  • 9 years ago

    by Maher

    A poem about a poem about a special something. This is the Inception of poetry. Nice :)

  • 9 years ago

    by gumshuda

    Ehh... :o u wrote a poem about ur 280th poem... from where do u get such ideas....i'm jealous -_-
    when i'm all free...im gonna take writing classes from u...Teacher :P

    • 9 years ago

      by Sunshine

      Haahah ure too kind

  • 9 years ago

    by gumshuda

    Ummm...
    What is too kind in this??? O.o
    It's only jeolousy :p

    Jealousy jealousy and nothing else :p

  • 9 years ago

    by Tim

    I don't want to compliment your work, or even critique it, as I find such minute imperfections I may find as perfection within their own merit. Thus I feel talking to you about the situation of jealousy you find yourself with the other reader of this poem.

    I totally understand the jealousy of other people who've commented on this piece. It's truly exceptional, not only this specific piece, but the tools that lay within you that you use to create such artwork, run throughout the work you present here... It's not that you experience things any different from anyone else, or even that you have better more founded ideas to write about, but that you have a detective like skill set for seeking out actualities within both yourself and the world around you: to minute details. Then you are able to capture the things you find both powerfully and delicately using your extensive vocabulary as well and linguistic finesse, which is something most of us find difficult to keep at balance. That is why people look upon you and the things you write with awe, and in some cases envy or jealousy. They shouldn't because you're nothing more and nothing less meaningful than any one of them, and I know you know that because you're a deep thinker and an educator yourself, but understand that those feelings of others are compliments of the highest degree.

    You should be really proud of your 280th poem, I certainly thank you for sharing it.

    Keep penning the good fight

    5/5

    • 9 years ago

      by Sunshine

      That was an exceptional comment Tim! I did not see it coming at all, I was just admiring your rhyming skills in my club, having no idea you read my work.

      I ofcourse know, it's not jealousy, Purvi is a kind girl haha, anyway I am really humbled, really.

      thank you!

  • 9 years ago

    by gumshuda

    Lol ran ...
    Well I am kind and nice and sweet only as long as I like someone ... Once I hate someone, gosh.. I become horrible...lol... But then it takes a lot in someone and a lot of work to get me to hate you :p

    Hmmm.... Why can no one see the jealous factor in me... Even I get jealous.. A lot actually... :/

  • 9 years ago

    by Sunshine

    Hahaha egh go study!

  • 9 years ago

    by Tim

    Yeah Queeny go study! you need to get into that university :P

  • 9 years ago

    by Brookie

    Dont you know that the biggest form of flattery is jealousy... x3 they ser you're jealous but they take it as a compliment because they love you so much

  • 9 years ago

    by gumshuda

    Willow got it right... ;)
    You be jealous of a person whom you want to become like... Whose qualities you like... Or who has something which you wish even you could attain...
    And because they are or have qualities you wish you had... You tend to like them and love them...

    So haha.... I love you ran :D

  • 9 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    This is a brilliant poem. There's a really unique feel to this piece which I enjoyed immensely. Well done, Rania,
    All the best,
    Ben