Missing an old best friend

by Bayan   Feb 18, 2015


Don't Know When This Wound Will Heal
There Is So Much Pain In My Heart I Feel

I See No Light and No Air To Breathe
Am Stuck in A cave With So Many Fears

Thinking of Someone Who Used To Be
A Very Dear Friend And Close To Me

Every Little Thing He Says Or Dose
It Turns My Broken Heart To Shreds

I Really Can't Take This Ache Anymore
It Has Made My Heart A Bleeding Core

27.5.2014

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  • 9 years ago

    by yogi73

    This is a touching poem that evokes emotions. It's not overdone, the rhyme and flow also work. But mostly it's the emotions that really shines through.

    • 9 years ago

      by Bayan

      Thank Youuu :))

  • 9 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    A friend is someone who makes you feel better not worse. So if this friend hurts you with actions and words then...he really isn't a friend to wait upon. Maybe he does not know what he is saying is right and is openly speaking out. Either way a friend is one who is always there for you, not disappear on you...take care.

    • 9 years ago

      by Bayan

      You're right Meena
      and he USED to be my best friend
      And used to make me feel better and always around
      but don't know what happened
      as he said that's life nothing stay the way it was everything one day may change

      but I stil miss him
      and when I see him with his friends new ones
      That what hurts me :/

      Thank u :)

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