My Pain.

by Bayan   Feb 18, 2015


There's Something in my heart, Please Tell me what to DO?
Can you please Help me, its really Painful too!

It's hurting so Bad, Can't handle this Pain,
I Feel IT in my Heart, my whole Life was in Vain..

Nights Can't Count Them, I spent in Tears,
Nights couldn't sleep'em, 'coz of my Fears..

Afraid I Can't LOVE, with this thing in my heart
Afraid I Can't TRUST, and it's tearing me apart

Can you please tell me, how to Heal this Pain?
This thing in my heart, it's so hard to Sustain!

So one more time, I ask you what to DO?
Coz who knows? one Day, you may Feel it too..

31.1. 2015

    report violation
0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 9 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Pain comes to when you have fear, lost something dear and perhaps not able to find someone who cares for you. I agree with the comment, let go of the past and start healing... :)

    Writing in a way is good and the more you write the more one feels better. Keep writing and slowly the language itself will flow from your pen beautifully...take care.

    • 9 years ago

      by Bayan

      Thanks Meena :))

  • 9 years ago

    by Everlasting

    The good news is that the pain seems to come from the heart in a metaphorical way, meaning it's about feelings, perhaps heartbroken, or something along the meaning of that word. The pain will subside.

    I agree with Marvellous, keep inking and thinking. By the looks of it, and a few other of your poems, you write using meter. Iambic in general.. though not on this one... were you trying something in specific?

    • 9 years ago

      by Bayan

      Actually I've never studied poetry..
      I only write what comes to my mind.. Trusting my ear
      I only try to put up the words in my heart in a beautiful way; Searching for words that rhyme

      I usually even write on the go
      I don't really make sure that everything I write is grammatically correct
      I sometimes have the possibility to correct and make the English as good as it could be
      But mostly I don't have that luxury

  • 9 years ago

    by Marvellous

    Pain only comes from what you fear. Bury the Past and look ahead. There's always one out there, who cares. Within every scar, healing dwells.

    There's always a place, called forward..
    Keep inking and don't stop thinking.

    • 9 years ago

      by Bayan

      Thaaanks Alooot ♡ !!

Read All Comments (6)

More Poems By Bayan