Pseudonym (Acrostic)

by Meme   Feb 19, 2015


Pardon my skepticism,
sometimes it becomes
easier to hide yourself
underneath the lines of
divergence. To show
only a little bit of you,
not the vulnerability
you keep within, when
many fail to understand.

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© Copyright 2015 by: gIrL
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  • 9 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    I envy your writing talent and skills! The way you write acrostic poetry never fails to amaze me and how you master that perfected flow! There is no stumbling or errors, and it all comes together so smoothly like you were not following any rules! I always struggle with this myself, but when you do it, I always find myself impressed!

    I love the content of the poem, and to put this in this tricky and limiting form was very creative and brave, I find it works well and you will draw in reader's empathy and understanding of this life situation.

    Perfect title choice too... well done on that one!

    • 9 years ago

      by Meme

      Thank you Saff! I always love your comments.

  • 9 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Loved this acrostic! And I agree with the others who have commented, it is very true. Sometimes it's a relief and simply less painful to keep certain things to yourself. I think it takes great courage and trust to expose yourself, to make yourself vulnerable, especially in love. There are only certain people I feel myself with, or comfortable enough with, because it takes time for people to know and try to understand who you are.

    • 9 years ago

      by Meme

      Thank you for the comment :)

  • 9 years ago

    by gumshuda

    How true how true... :)

    • 9 years ago

      by Meme

      Yeaa.. So true