Awh wow, this really is quite something. This definitely came from some real life truth; from a place you hold dear to you. I hope you get all the things out of this situation, that you're hoping for.

The piece itself is very well written, and a lot of thought has gone into presentation as always :) I really get a strong mental image from this piece of the kind of situation you're in and how you think and feel about it. - Which is exactly what is suppose to happen to a reader, so top marks for that.

Keep penning Bayan

5/5