I like the combination and comparison of your love with nature and things around you. When one is in love everything around us is sweet and love does take the heart high into the sky...nice read.

Augustus,

This is a lovely little love poem that's written with an honesty that shines through as it's read. Excellent.

Well done and take care
Ben

This is so sweet and romantic and if this is based on someone special, I really hope you gave this to them to read, this shouldn't go unnoticed! ^_^ Awhh, Very sweet, heart-felt poem, Augastus c;