Powerful! I chose "Keep it to yourself" as my prompt too, and in these few lines, it illustrates that tension with your love. How you're pleading for them to listen. Whatever these illusions may be, they need to think again or stay silent before acting on impulse or what they "perceive". |
by Beautiful Soul
This poem stands out on its own merit, I love how love stands out on its own, because you are speaking to a certain person a person you are or were close with, a friend or a former lover maybe. also you do make the reader curious to see where you are going with this piece. The second line is almost apologetic, like you are saying sorry for something that you don't have to at all. what are these illusions are there here? Then the last line hits you and the person you are writing about in the face. such a great twist in the ending. Now you are saying to this person "shut up, I have listened to your hurtful words for long enough". I love this for each stanza tells a story in such few words. well done! |
by Baby Rainbow
I like where you took this one as well and how you managed to keep it to a short poem, with a simple message portrayed! |