A cry for help - Modern Senryu

by Everlasting   Feb 25, 2015


A pen wobbles
at the edge of a wooden desk
yearning for a hand

Written by: L.L.
February 24, 2015

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  • 9 years ago

    by Jyoti Rawat

    It is nicely written but i did t get it correct meaning.

  • 9 years ago

    by GB

    I suppose you mean Senryu that doesn't follow the strict syllable count 5/7/5.

    Beautifully penned piece, Luce. Writing about writing is always interesting.

    • 9 years ago

      by Everlasting

      Hi GB,

      Yeah, a modern Senryu is a haiku/Senryu that has either 17 syllables or less. thank you for reading.

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