I love it when two genres are mixed together. There is a very smart mixture in this nature poem that holds this mysterious touch.

The title was very eye catchy, loved it.

The creature and the description of the creature is mind blowing, completely nailed.

For someone reason the closing verse made me feel a little sad, and for some other reasons I felt irony or hidden ranting...This poem was seriously just different.

And I hope it ends up on the front page.
Excellent collaboration.