Comments : The frog, the ant, and the bird

  • 9 years ago

    by Chamomile

    I really love this, it is fun to read!!!
    It flows smoothly, as I was reading I started picturing your words and I wanted to read more :)

    I hope you continue it soon^_^

    • 9 years ago

      by Everlasting

      Thank you Chamamole! I hope to continue it too. Lol

  • 9 years ago

    by gumshuda

    Heehhhhhh....another to be continued???? :/

    • 9 years ago

      by Everlasting

      Ah Purvi, yes! Lol I start but I don't finish it.

  • 9 years ago

    by Larry Chamberlin

    Fingers tapping in anticipation
    . . . . . . .

  • 9 years ago

    by gumshuda

    Hmmm......well luso...at least you do complete it later on...some people just forget about it ;)
    But yes it is awesome...i hope it turns out like the bluebird...that poem is in my favourites :p

  • 9 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Well I guess every little living thing has a gift of God to go else where, to seek protection, shelter etc. I like the views of the three living animals here...waiting to read more!