If you break my heart.
by Tiffany Mar 1, 2015
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You are my heart, you are my soul |
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9 years agoby kimberley walt
Tiffany, this is a great poem. I like the twist at the end. It's awesome.
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9 years ago
by kimberley walt
Tiffany, this is a great poem. I like the twist at the end. It's awesome.
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9 years ago
by kimberley walt
Tiffany, this is a great poem. I like the twist at the end. It's awesome.
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9 years ago
by Beautiful Soul
This is a really cute poem you have written here and I love the ending as is gives the reader something to think about. Karma is a great revenge that is skillful yet deadly when it happens. I do love also how you wrote this about "light" and at the end you swung it around with darkness, I thought that was clever of you to do. This person means a lot to you and if they hurt you in anyway then the darkness will over take them. Your wording is sweet and soft, almosy song like, which impresses me a lot. Great write, 5/5
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9 years ago
by Tiffany
Thank you! Me and my best friend came up with the poem, we where both very proud of it, so I signed up to this site and submitted this and a couple other poems I have made, I also put quotes, I enjoy doing this site!
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9 years ago
by Tiffany
This poem was made by me, please make a comment so I know if you like it or not! Thank you! =)
