Like two white Doves

by Everlasting   Mar 6, 2015


Because we fell in love like two whites doves
Just falling slowly and deeply in love
With our arms embracing each other with love
They saw us falling and came to prey and feed from us.

They thought our meat would make them taste the skies above
So when we finally set our feet and walked in this valley of love
They became a tiger to hunt us down until we were gone.

but how foolish of them to attacks us with their claws
when they already saw we fell in love like two white doves
we just spread our wings, and with the help of the wind,
we flew and left them fighting as if they were killing us.

Written by: L.L

Prompt:

You are walking with your loved one in a very beautiful valley, you are both enjoying immensely, suddenly some (any number) assassins attack. And they have a reason. What do you do? Run? Fight? Why did they attacked you? Take this anywhere, make your self a spy or anything but it should relate with the prompt and is between 80 to 150 words. You title is: Can be anything related to the prompt, your choice. Given by: Arcaine ( a poet from other community )

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  • 9 years ago

    by Beautiful Soul

    This is beautiful Luce. There were a lot of things running through my head as I read this. The obvious being that you are in love, and that love flutters over everything, but while you are in love, there is always people who try to stop you. which is where the tigers came in. I love the metaphors you have used here. The doves represent peace and love even, and the tigers are your enemy so to speak. But no matter what happens, Love will win out if you want it to. 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    This reminds me of how in some community, families don't accept the child's partner and their very own family attack sometimes even kill them. But love is stronger then that and no matter what it can't be destroyed.

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