Death Notes

by Emily Wacker   Mar 7, 2015


If the death note is what is found,
Then what is truly gone?
The soul,
The oh so innocent soul,
Trapped forever in a happiness forbidden place,
They're not supposed to go like that,
And when they realize what they gave up,
They will want to write a life note.

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  • 6 years ago

    by Maher

    I'm more into rhyming poetry, but I love exceptions like this little gem. Kinda makes you think harder about life and what can be lost. I like how it leaves the doors open to thoughts of what could have been for persons in that situation. Very thought provoking.

    I agree with Mr Pickard: this is a pretty clever write indeed :)

    • 6 years ago

      by Emily Wacker

      Oh my goodness, thank you so much, Maher! and that means so much that this is enjoyable even seeing as it isn't your preferred style. All the best,
      -Emily

  • 6 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    A clever little write, Emily; well done.

    Ben

  • 9 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Excellent!

  • 9 years ago

    by Jose Delapaz

    Beautiful!!!!!!!

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