What goes unnoticed.

This is one of yours which I really connect to, and in answer to the question in this, what do I notice in you... I notice that you write things I can connect to more than anyone else on here does. I feel like I could never write again and still express my emotions and thoughts simply by reading your work!

I love the opening of the poem, with the name and how you spell it, I relate to this because I have an awkward name that no one ever used to get right in my life, and it used to mean so much when someone got it right, but then I realised it only mattered that they got it right if that person meant something to me.

I think you have gave this poem a perfect mix of personal emotion, but also enough room for the reader to interpret the poem into their own life.

Love this write from you!!

I absolutely love the simplicity in this and just how personal it seems to you. I can relate because my real name is also two names in one, but the "second" name (Liz) the L is capitalized. People usually just leave it out of my name completely or say it wrong altogether, so I tell everyone to call me Liz. Sorry for the ramble, just thought it was kinda funny.

Anyway, as far as the rest of the poem- I know it's a subject relatable to others. When you're with someone and just ask yourself "what the heck do you see in me?!"

I love this.