Mountain Dew

by Maple Tree   Mar 18, 2015


I wore a vacant expression-

Under the stairs

in the dark.

The crowd had departed,
smells of stale popcorn and
Marlboro cigarettes was enough
to make anyone nauseated,

but I was only fourteen-
it wasn't the odor in the air
that made me ill with anxiety
filled butterflies....

It was the boy sitting next to me-

with a vacant expression

under the stairs

in the dark.

I kissed a boy I hardly knew
with cotton candy stuck to his shoe,
all I could taste was surgery, sweet
Mountain Dew....

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Just a teenage memory I felt like writing,
decided to be playful with the format and
add a fun rhyme stanza at the end.

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  • 9 years ago

    by Beautiful Soul

    The feeling of this poem is expressed well and gives the reader something to think about. I think we have all felt this way in our teenage years. The imagery is stunning here as well. you did a great job in detailing the atmosphere around you and put the reader in here you are. This makes me feel like an after hours party scene or maybe at a carnival. You are nervous and scared because this is the first time you have ever kissed a boy. This poem is wonderful for the brevity and imagery it holds inside. It is nothing short of stunning. 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by K6

    Its a great poem. I liked it.