Its a great poem. I liked it.

The feeling of this poem is expressed well and gives the reader something to think about. I think we have all felt this way in our teenage years. The imagery is stunning here as well. you did a great job in detailing the atmosphere around you and put the reader in here you are. This makes me feel like an after hours party scene or maybe at a carnival. You are nervous and scared because this is the first time you have ever kissed a boy. This poem is wonderful for the brevity and imagery it holds inside. It is nothing short of stunning. 5/5