by John Doe Mar 20, 2015
category :
Dark, fantasy /
unexplained
It had been a drizzly day, |
by Ben Pickard
Excellent write. |
by John Doe
Thank you!! |
It's very long if it's not separated in stanzas which is the only thing I really love in a poem, I don't want just a story. I want a story I can read a story that dresses itself in poetry and I think that's what lacked in my eyes, besides that it was very nice. 5/5 |
by John Doe
Okay,I'll work on it. |