by HumanInATree Mar 22, 2015
category :
Nature, environment /
nature
It seems like it was yesterday, the night we spent on the mountainside gazing upon the stars and sipping from that bottle of Moscato. When was it? I'm thinking it had to have been May. Well after all the showers and the flowers had started to bloom, with the scent of life in the air; it was so beautiful. It was near the fifteenth, but all I can really remember was that I never wanted those nights to end. I remember walking on that old stone path admiring your every step. As the light from my torch glistened like melting silver reflecting off of your hair in golden light, like a torch of its own, I was guided deeper into your soul. I remember how vivid the moon was that night; how your eyes fit so perfectly against the light as if they were creating an eclipse. You were definitely meant to be something more, something more than what you were. I remember seeing you yawn as you sat against that old oak tree. Basking in your beauty, you seemed to slip into nature. You could have been an angel sent from the stars. Your luring figure mimicked the beauty of the towering oak with ease. "The body of an angel," I recall thinking to myself, with legs that twisted my mind like the limbs of the northeast trees by the water's edge. I loved the way your silhouette formed among the stars and your hair flowed in the nightly breeze, with lips that shimmered like rippling light dripping from the nearby rocks of the creek. Watching the wind blow your hair across your face was as enchanting as watching deer emerge from the foliage of a forest. Before I slid into a trance, you broke my train of thought with what you said; "Baby, I'll remember this night forever". Honestly, that night couldn't have gotten any better than what it already was. Even if I live to be a thousand years old, I couldn't dream of a better experience. |
by Liz
Way beyond amazing. I love the story, the imagery is perfect. It really helps the reader imagine everything. From the rock that looked like a whale, to the Ursa Major, to the journal passages- it's all just incredible. I can't help but think this is personal and close to you. Thank you for sharing this. |
by HumanInATree
It has bits from my life, but its all part of my book TheOneHumanInATree. |