I love the way you went about creating a poem out of list. It has a unique feel and pace to it. Perhaps it could have been reworded a little to be a little more even or well put, but it was a cool idea and I love how you used multiple flavors to capture this person and what they do to your artistic senses. The shades of each color you chose are interesting, some cliche' others more out there- but true in nature to the person. Great write.