by BlueJay
I love the way you wrote the first few lines, they really set the tone and caught my attention. The personality in this is amazing, so is the honesty. |
by Baby Rainbow
Amazing entry here, I second what Maddy has said, you did set a nice tone and it remained throughout the poem. I like how you just took something personal and stuck with the raw emotions behind it. It makes your poem easy to relate to, and follow. |