I enjoy poems that repeat a particular word for emphasis, like you have with sometimes. It feels like each time I read the word again the poem moves a level deeper. It is a powerful poetry tool. It is interesting too that your stanzas could be read all separately, talking about specific people each time, or read interconnected to be telling a story about this relationship you had that was beautiful and now feels gone. Poetry is one of the best ways I have found to drain away some of that emotional poison of pain and loss. Let it out.

~Cheers~
Ellie

Writing, painting or making music is a good way of expressing your emotions. There are people who enter our lives for a brief moment and make a big impression. We can't really explain why or what it was but we remember them. There is a reason for everything. Keep on writing

Beautiful insight, well described emotions and feelings and lovely imagery! An experience shared by most people at times in their lives, so it is easy to empathise with you! You said that this was written in the past but,
unless you have edited it, it feels much more recent! Lovely poem, with a tinge of sadness!