Comments : FOOD WAS LEFT ON THE PLATE

  • 9 years ago

    by GB

    I have been reading your poem for at least three times so far. I'm amazed at your ability to use nature as a main character for presenting your different thoughts, that's something really distinguished your poetry very much on this site.

    The depth of the poem made me ponder over the concept of change, just to satisfy the other partner.
    Everything is meaningfully beautiful in this writing and your closure is more than successful. I just wish you didn't write your title in upper-case letters, as far as I know it's against the rules.

    Fantastic, thank you for sharing.