On picking up my wife's shoe at the repair shop (Senryu)

by Larry Chamberlin   Mar 30, 2015


This shoe is so small
it can't hold her full spirit
she walks in starlight

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  • 9 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Judging Comment

    Larry truly knows how to mesmerize the reader with the senryu form!

    This formed poem is very touching and classic!

    "The shoe may be small in size, but the beauty of the woman wearing it is far more greater" just my interpretation of the message... I smiled with great joy after I read this...

    Walking in starlight holds such a magical feeling and using it to interpret his Wife's spirit is beyond loving and romantic.

    Beautiful poem by Larry this week!!

  • 9 years ago

    by GB

    Oh, Larry, what a small gem. It captured my heart how you made the fact of large foot a very loving theme, excellently penned.

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