Caliraya

by Mahal Ko Kuya Ko   Mar 30, 2015


Your footsteps are never meant
to decorate this lonely alleyway
with Tulips and Chrysanthemum,
nor with Bluebells and Daffodils...

only with Dandelions,
yes... just Dandelions.

I will ride that boat again
to cross this artificial lake...

this time,
not with you...

but with the sun spots
that nearly cover the desire and urges
to always be with you.

I will abandon another poem
for the nth time,
because the sky is Raspberry
and it found me writing about you again
a long while ago.

Lowly Larks fail to reach
the summer skies.
And the weeping tides try
to find serendipity
with the poems I wrote relentlessly
about you;
but they only find Dandelions...

only Dandelions,
yes... just Dandelions.

After three days,
we will meet someone's departure.
His farewell will reach us at twilight
amidst Bracken Vines
and some unknown voice
that speaks in foreign language --
reflecting the way cerulean boats
cross this lake.

This lake doesn't seem
to house dreams, but it does...
doesn't seem to play hide and seek,
but it does...
and doesn't seem to listen
to a poetry made of
cities, mountainsides,
raindrops, remorse, footsteps,
February, and the nights I lay awake
just thinking of you,
but it does.

I wonder...
will it also listen to a poem
made of Dandelions?

Only Dandelions,
yes... just Dandelions.

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  • 9 years ago

    by Dancing Rivers

    Oh my gosh im absolutely nominating this one next week and adding to my favourites. A stunningly eloquent and beautifique piece.

  • 9 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    This is a flawlessly written piece. An absolute joy to read, well structured and truly poetic throughout.

  • 9 years ago

    by GB

    Weekly contest April 6th
    Judging comment:

    I'm impressed by the poetic skills used in this writing, the journey across the Caliraya lake narrated excellently. His introduction was very attractive, referring to his memories of the dandelion, a word that was used several times in the poem giving a great example for the poetic use of repetition.
    A great diction and a very balanced tone we feel in every stanza, despite the random structure of the poem.
    His closure as well was not less enthusiastic, it's the part where the poet conjoin the relation between the lake and the dandelion, and its poetry, at its finest level.

  • 9 years ago

    by Karla

    Gorgeous piece!

  • 9 years ago

    by alka mendiratta

    Dashiel,you just sway the reader in your poetry .This time riding a boat on an artificial lake ................remembering the beautiful moments ......the love for Dandelions.