Dashiel,you just sway the reader in your poetry .This time riding a boat on an artificial lake ................remembering the beautiful moments ......the love for Dandelions.

Gorgeous piece!

Weekly contest April 6th
Judging comment:

I'm impressed by the poetic skills used in this writing, the journey across the Caliraya lake narrated excellently. His introduction was very attractive, referring to his memories of the dandelion, a word that was used several times in the poem giving a great example for the poetic use of repetition.
A great diction and a very balanced tone we feel in every stanza, despite the random structure of the poem.
His closure as well was not less enthusiastic, it's the part where the poet conjoin the relation between the lake and the dandelion, and its poetry, at its finest level.

This is a flawlessly written piece. An absolute joy to read, well structured and truly poetic throughout.

Oh my gosh im absolutely nominating this one next week and adding to my favourites. A stunningly eloquent and beautifique piece.