The Circus

by Hellon   Apr 4, 2015


Spring-time carnival
air abuzz with excitement;
candy-floss faces.

@Hellon 4th April 2015

Haiku or Senyu?

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  • 9 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Judging Comments

    Hellon created a beautiful Senryu this week. She captivated me with visuals of the circus and smells of cotton candy, all in a tiny little formed poem, just beautiful!

  • 9 years ago

    by Beautiful Soul

    Congrats on the win Hellon!

  • 9 years ago

    by Beautiful Soul

    Congrats on the win Hellon!

  • 9 years ago

    by GB

    Congratulations prof, very delightful piece.
    Glad to see you posting again.

  • 9 years ago

    by Meme

    Senryu for sure. And I loved how you captured the sense of the place in these few lines. You set the surroundings, the smell, everything so vividly. Amazing how a writer can capture that in such a restrictive form.

    Loved it!

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