Your poem depicts your loneliness; an appropriate title Orphan Chrysanthemum. |
by Meena Krish
I like the title for it sets up the reader with the loneliness that is about to unfold. Your poem not only has an imagery the reader can see but also get connected with your feelings...another lovely write. |
by NightFlyer
Can feel the your deep melancholy and the loss that you are feeling,expressed very elegantly... |