Remembering the loved one in a depressed state of mind. The smile of one which lifted up the poet's spirit and made life worth living.
Loved the form as usual: beautifully penned,Meena :)

Nothing is worthwhile without the things and the people that make this life worth living. And we can't just help it but yearn and miss them and feel the pain it brings. A moving write, Ms. Meena (: I enjoyed reading this (: Very relatable. Good job with the form, as usual (:

--- MKKK

As someone who has lost my best friend, I can feel your grief, expressed so beautifully. We never really get over something like this, it always be there for the rest of our lives.

Really a very good poem. I love the style. Great job. 5/5

New form to me, I like exploring new forms and this one caught my attention. Would love to use it one day.

Your piece taking in mind the restrictive nature of the form flowed with ease, it did not seem forced any bit, and that what makes a great writer. Loved the simplicity of your words.

Great piece

Oh Meena, such a touching little poem, and you have done so with another formed piece and impressively showed us more of your skills.

The wording to this poem is so beautiful it really reaches out to any reader who is missing someone dear to them, and who knows how hard it is to long for their smile again.

I think your title is simple, but it sums up very well what it is like, and how it feels so often when we are grieving. Sometimes it feels happy to remember them, like we are close to them, but other times it feels impossible to live without them, and remembering them only hurts more and makes everything else seem pointless.

Beautifully worded!

Love this Meena!

I think this is my favorite part

bits of me crumble as I yearn
for your return,

Love it! So much emotion in such a small poem. I've never heard of this form before but I really liked it. Will have to try it sometime. Always a pleasure to read your work :] -Nik

The best poets express the profoundest things into a wee version. That what I'm viewing in this write. That shows the great quality of poets.

Missing someone really creates huge pain upon our soul. But it can also be good, because it takes us in the past to recall all the merry moments while the woe moments also.

This piece is truly marvellous and different from other writes. It contains love and grief in a huge amount. The words and sentences are very much just. Wow!!

You have again shown your great writing skill. 5/5 STARS

Very, very cleverly written - well done. Love it.

Meena,

This is such a great piece. The rhyming and flow goes hand and hand which makes it even greater.

Such an emotional piece written beautiful. You have are a unique writer.

Em