I feel that this is so personal comments might be over the line no matter what they say, but I also feel that it should be clearly stated that this is stunningly painful to read and is extremely well penned. It's not only creatively dark, but each word enhances the power of the next, so phenomenal word choice.

Heartfelt, I know that this poem wasn't really made for you specifically but that's how I would write my feelings out. This pain inside my heart would feel for had it been about you but I know it's not about I will say this: it's relatable to those that have loved and lost the person that hey have loved the most. Really touching.

Have a nice day 5/5

-Mori

Judging Comment:

This was a very nice tribute to a fallen love. Shows how pure and true that this love was, and how it will always be, besides the emotions sucker-punching you with the raw emotions screaming of mourning. The imagery was very nicely done, emphasizing the emotions but mostly empowering the visuals so that both could make your eyes and mind cry. Very beautiful.

- Moria Bella Bair -