Comments : The Machine is Breaking Down!

  • 9 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    I like the creativity of this piece.

    It is short, interesting to read, and different to a lot of cliché poems on here which ramble on about the same stuff, I feel this poem has something unique about it.

  • 9 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    As Saffie says, a unique write that had me nodding along!
    All the very best
    Ben