by Zabadak Apr 9, 2015
category :
Love, romance /
secret love
So much I want to say, but I can say nothing. |
by Ben Pickard
A great, blunt little write - I love that last line. |
by Baby Rainbow
Short and sweet, and I think this poem highlights my point of your exclamation mark. You have not overused it, therefore it really puts an emphasis on that end line, and the one before. Makes it better... just because it does. |