Comments : Angel Games!

  • 9 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Short and sweet, and I think this poem highlights my point of your exclamation mark. You have not overused it, therefore it really puts an emphasis on that end line, and the one before. Makes it better... just because it does.

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    A great, blunt little write - I love that last line.
    All the best
    Ben