Is your sky still crimson?
Does Manila draw a lonely Azalea
in your eyes again?
Don't hide your brush anymore.
It is not meant to be
in the pavement of your thoughts.
Make the strokes that you want;
be a surrealist or an expressionist
as long as you won't forget
about the man that is
standing by the bridge
embellished with my foolish poetry.
The broken lines I mimicked
when skies burned like Sunflowers
on a mid-summer field
are massacred by
an expressionless sophistication
'neath January and
woebegone canvases.
Perhaps, it's a palette,
a pastel-colored symphony,
or an old poem
with untamed words and imagery
that makes the horizon
a Phoenix with thousand flames.
Paint my poetry
in placid hues again,
watch it die in February...
and harbor promises
when twilight becomes
a portrait of your footsteps.
Be the spectator
when our art burns in the skies.
Would you still mind
if your sky is still crimson?
I like how you use the names of the months in your poetry, very classy and very recalling as well.
Including names also, though it can be a bit vague for many readers to grasp the meaning behind the poem, still a unique touch in of itself.
Your imagery and metaphors incredibly picturesque, which makes your poetry vivid and resonating.